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Message to Readers
Here’s to another year :)
Okay, so ... yes, talking about stepping into a new year is pretty ... redundant to me. But I really liked this poem anyways! I love how you put everything (vague, though it may be) that happens in a year into a single poem. You wrote this almost in a continual sentence, which helps the reader to continue to the end. I also love how to capitalized the last line. =)
I like this as-is. It's interesting and relatable. You also have a different structure, which sometimes doesn't really work, but it does here. =)
Thank you for this encouraging poem! Write on!