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The idea that fire was the mind of a human. It seems like such an interesting concept.
I think maybe putting more symbolism in some of the sentences to make the ones that are pushy and short really count.
*Whispering to self* (Maybe I should give bad comments!!! Then I have a better chance of winning!)
Totally joking, great job on this!