Familiar

Xavier Nelson

United States

Message to Readers

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Our Fire #Fire

December 30, 2018

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Did you know that when you snuff out a candle it doesn't hurt?

It's almost like life in a way.

We're born.

We live short, quick lives.

Then our fire gets snuffed out by something we have no control over.

The candle tries to burn the one that hurt it in a beyond-the-grave effort at revenge.

But it can't.

Useless and weak, it amounted to nothing in its life.

Maybe one day we'll be strong enough to burn down everything in our way.

Blaze our own path.

Create our own future.

I can imagine this place where our fire is brilliant enough to ignite everyone's souls.

A world in which we're all shining magnificently.

Where our fire does not get smothered by depravity.

It can rage brilliantly throughout the night.

The stars will cower in fear from our beauty.

Then the world will be ours.

As our fire burns our legacy into the sky.

 

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8 Comments
  • Johanna

    LOVE that last line. I thought I was already following you!


    8 months ago
  • PureHeart

    Contest results are here!


    8 months ago
  • Xavier Nelson

    Thank you so much c:


    9 months ago
  • Kahasai

    There's a lot of good metaphors and strong visuals in here. So strong, in fact, it leaves an after-image. :)


    9 months ago
  • Xavier Nelson

    Sure, why not? I've never reviewed anything on this site since I'm new though, so sorry if it isn't up to standard :c


    9 months ago
  • Blotted Ink with a Broken Quill

    Hey, I know that you don't owe me anything, but would you be willing to review mine? It's called "The Musings Of A Burnt Piece Of Air." https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/96972/version/184446


    9 months ago
  • Xavier Nelson

    Thank you so much ^w^


    9 months ago
  • Rose, Thorn

    I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THIS!!!


    9 months ago