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Message to Readers
I am also planning on writing a poem based off a line in this piece.
"My indecision is a hopeless endeavour in itself."
If there's another line in this piece that stands out to you, please let me know! I would love to write a story/poem based off it and dedicate it to you <3
Everything! The whole "mosquito to a lamp" and being drawn to it, the strange pill and plethora of code, the delete and the save and the cancel, that IMAGERY, that CLIFFHANGER... I had to read this over a few times because I was so stunned, I thought, "there is no way it ends like this", but then it did! That sure was a ride to remember! That cliffhanger, though... woah! :DD
... Do I really have to say it? I believe that the ending leaves a tiny little bit of curiosity that most readers such as myself must find an answer to, so without saying much... I am so curious! That ending! (insert frustrated hand motions) Besides that, amazing! <3
I am soooo sooo sorry, this took so long!! Such a good cliffhanger though, I'm so glad I finally got to it!