fatpanda

India

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wrecked

the rainbow of their lives #cliffhangerqueencontest

December 29, 2018

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she sees red,
hot anger causing
salty tears to burst forth.

blue waters flow, 
arriving at a cesspool 
of guilt and suffering.

a girl arrives in 
the yellow sunshine.

she dips her bottle into the water
and sips.
poisoned, green foam forms at her mouth.

the harsh crow of the siren in the air
it is punctuated by raspy breaths
as the signal blares orange

under the violet sky.

she is taken to a room
antidote pumped through her veins
just in time.

eyes open to an indigo mess   
the girl who started it all
the one who's tears poisoned her.

a circle never ends

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7 Comments
  • Quille

    Winners announced! :)
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/103314/version/197305
    Thank you for entering :DD


    9 months ago
  • nevaredhp

    I love all of the colors! And they don't feel forced at all; they're intertwined perfectly.


    11 months ago
  • Quille

    WOW! I really like your phrasing & descriptive word choice! Good job :DD


    11 months ago
  • Johanna

    Mischief managed indeed!!


    11 months ago
  • Araw

    Beautiful descriptions!


    11 months ago
  • muppet

    i love the ending as well.... "A circle never ends"


    11 months ago
  • muppet

    "eyes open to an indigo mess" is SUCH a beautiful line


    11 months ago