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I didn't think I'd be excited to share this, since I'm mostly publishing this to demonstrate my use of interludes, but here I am, feeling excited.
It's a suspenseful prologue, which I think is very delightful!
Obviously, I'd love to know who the characters are, what's happening, etc, but that's the beauty of the prologue and what it's supposed to do.