The Inspiration

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STARTED WRITING WHEN I WAS 9 YEARS
WRITING OPENED ME UP IN LIFE AND LOVE
let life take u and rise above all
I am 13 now
''Difficult roads often lead u to beautiful destinations''

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This is my first story after a long period of time not on this website. I even getting ready to right a book. Please give feedback and over course follow me!!!!!!!!!

Last Hope

December 26, 2018

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You said you were right behind me.
I turned to see nothing but my dark shadow. 
I called your name only to hear my own echo.
I looked around to know where I was.
Empty.
Closed.
Dark.
I fell into a deep hole.
That's it. 
I wake up to the loud noise of bombs being thrown from the sky.
I was taken cover near a huge rock on the floor, stained with someones blood. 
I now remember where I was, I was in war. 
Knockout.
Blackout. 
What I saw.
What I heard. 
Is something I will never forget. 
It was the most disturbing scene.
It came to a point I could not hear anything. 
Suddenly, someone then with huge arms pulled me. 
A man with a huge bread told me were outnumbered. 
I then noticed he was wounded.
There were no medics.
He then pull my face to  to look straight in his eyes.
He said "Your our last hope" 
He cough and then was gone.
Just like that.
I wept not only because the man's death but how I would be able to survive this war .
I then saw a few men crawling to me.
They asked me what they were going to do.
I was surprise they looked at me as their leader. 
How was I going to win? How was I the last hope?
Then pulled myself together 
I told them" we have to fight till our last breathe, we have to hide and think smart before attacking." 
The few men understood what I had told them and tried to take cover 
You side your right behind me oh Lord, 
Now I need you. 
I was one man with a few men fighting against thousands of others. 
But I WILL NOT LOSE without a fight.
I picked up my gun and aimed at an enemy. 
He looked like he saw me and aimed his gun too. 
I pulled my trigger,he pulled his.
Pow!
 

 

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