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.audrey michelle.

United States

.hi.
.im audrey.
.writing.
.reading.
.volleyball.
.art.
.i stand by the cold is better than the hear :D.
.chat if ur bored... idk... im bored!!!!.

Message to Readers

more weirdness, but irdc! it's creativity

my eyes, eyebrows, and hair are the only things i like ab my face... soooo... ye... why not emphasize that and work on liking the rest of my face...

idk...

some thoughts

it's a progression - ch. 5

December 29, 2018

FREE WRITING

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her green eyes
open wide...

the light shone in them,
making them look
beautiful...

a light olive color
with a dark rim.

*the doctors held her
down*

*they got the shaking to
stop*

*they shone a light
in them*

*and their dullness
faded away*

*like a green sun,
they shone*

*and they looked for a while
into her eyes*

*studied them*

*observed how they dilated*

*fascinated over them*

those eyes seemed 
to have new life
in them.

her face was rested
and her breathing
slowed.

they didn't know her name...

"we need a name for this
girl,"
a doctor said.

*someone walks in*

"her name's audrey,"
a voice said.

*the doctors looked at this
mysterious boy...*

*they remember she said
that 
he's coming for her*

and
there 
he 
is...

right
there 
for
her...
he 
came.....................

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5 Comments
  • Quille

    Wow! :DD


    6 months ago
  • Puppet_Master

    This is awesome!! Keep writing it I adore these! Also its so intense


    6 months ago
  • f l o r a

    uh..this is intriguing...but it doesn't seem like a novel piece. what happened to..youre actual novels? I miss those.


    6 months ago
  • .audrey michelle.

    big surprise... i changed my profile pic...

    OK EXPLINATION!!!

    i hated the other pic so i went back to this one that i also dont like but i like it a smidge better... idk... im using my face to try to boost my dwindling confidence


    7 months ago
  • .audrey michelle.

    IN MY PROFILE PIC... my eyes look brown... that's a SNAPCHAT FILTER!!!!!

    sorry ab the caps.. i had to get that out there!

    my eyes are actually green


    7 months ago