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janice

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#ManateeContest | all roses have thorns

December 25, 2018

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He gave it to me one day
Isn't it pretty?
It really wasn't
I never like them, but I kept it
Only for him
It withered
Its petals fell down
But its thorns, they stayed
Sharp as ever
Always ready to prick
Prick my finger, my heart
Either one worked
Both did, when he left

All roses have thorns
 
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6 Comments
  • Majestically Awkward Manatee

    CONTEST WINNERS ARE OUT!!!!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/97814/version/186085


    7 months ago
  • Majestically Awkward Manatee

    Also, I will let you know in the comments of this piece once the winners are posted. I have two pieces about details for the winner of my contest if you want to go look at those :)


    7 months ago
  • Majestically Awkward Manatee

    WOWEEEE!!! This is so beautiful! I love how it's sweet in the beginning, but the bitterness starts to take over in the ending! I really love the ending!! Great job and thanks so much for eenterting my contest!!


    7 months ago
  • Quille

    Wow!! this is soo good! :DD Good luck in the contest!!!!!!!! :DD


    7 months ago
  • Juliana

    Great job and good luck with the contest!


    7 months ago
  • AbigailSauble

    Aw ... this is so sweet/sad! Really love the story you describe. Even though your details are vague, and partially analogies. =)


    7 months ago