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This was a very interesting and intriguing story. I like how it shows the beauty and the pain as the years go by.
I’d love to know who’s eyes are seeing this happen. I’d love to know if the character is going to make a change to the world.
This was absolutely amazing, but you didn’t need the comma there when it says,”...warmest season, to the, most beautiful birds...” and instead of having the comma after, “I hate,that my dirt roads...” put it before.