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I was just moved by how powerful and sad this whole thing was. Everything fit together almost perfectly.
I want to know what people did to you. I already know about Enes, but I think it would be a little more informative to find out how others hurt you too.
This piece was such a nice read, I really enjoyed it, even though it almost brought tears to my eyes.