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I'd love to hear your thoughts about this, especially if you have a some kind of chronic illness or disability. But even if you don't, you're welcome in the conversation!
I relate to this so much. So often the "average" person doesn't realize how lucky they are to have representation. They don't realize the effect of having someone that is like them in media. What you're planning on doing is amazing. I strive for similar things in my own writing, because I agree. When the only representation you can relate to is about someone suffering and not being successful, it isn't true representation.
Not really much to say in this part. Any specific information on future projects are welcome. It all sounds amazing.
You captured the feeling of so many perfectly. I can't wait to see what you do next.
Also, I'm surprised (happily surprised of course) so see POTS included. My sister suffers from it and she loves being an active person, but it can really limit what she can do.