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I was moved by the gorgeous details used to describe the rose. You really humanize the beauty of the rose by providing it with emotions and feelings that validate the presence of this particular rose.
I would like to know more about how this rose fits into the context of a greater theme. What does this rose symbolize? What does this rose mean for the reader? How should the rose - how should love - be interpreted?
Hi! I absolutely adore your beautiful descriptions of the rose and the way you compare its ethereal delicacy to the roots that ground it - similar to the idea of love. I was moved by how deliberate your wording is and the way you phrase it to portray the greater theme of unity in love. Great work!