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Written By: Sarah Grimson
February 15, 2015
Her beauty is inevitable, perfect and young she played, laughed.
She parted the earth, her time was done, finished.
Her face faded, emptied of life’s emotions.
Her children grew old, time past.
Joined her in her castle, her home.
Her family was reuniting slowly.
Joined by their spirits.
All lights dimmed.