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This one's not fiction. My brother's been by my side ever since I can remember. There's a song similar to this called "Hey Brother" by Avicii. This poem is dedicated to my epic older bro.
Well, for one thing, I recently posted a poem titled 'My Sister', so of course this drew my attention. I loved this because I have five brothers, and as I grow up, each year, I love them more than the last. =)
Well, you could always write a story (or a string of stories) about adventures with your brother. But of course, that's entirely up to you. Sibling monologues, though, are some of the funniest. ;) You have a great poem here, and I love how it kinda compliments my 'sister' poem. Siblings are just awesome. =)
Beautiful job! You could always use stronger verbs/adjectives to make this slightly more descriptive, but it's great as-is!