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It had a very bright start and quickly turned. The message of it was prominent and striking. The simple rhyme scheme of an everyday nursery rhyme coupled with the sad reveal really hits the reader.
What exactly compelled you to write this? Where did the idea come from? Many of my ideas stem from sitting and thinking while the others are just "I have to write right now."
It was fantastic, and a sad truth. Studies of members of the iGen of Generation Z (gen-z) have showed that our brains are actually changing. We talk about it in one of my classes often because Gen-Z is also referred to as a hinge generation.