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Coupled with your strong command of the language, you paint very lovely pictures using these numbers as descriptors with empowering and striking undertones beneath it. So well done!
The cat misjudging the distance of the couch. I don't know about you but I found it immensely tickling since the stray ones living in the community garden some how always miss the next bench by whisker's length. I would love to know how 6 was related with kitties and their poor judgement. Seems like a fun tale coming right up.
Excellent job on weaving these numbers into 10 different legacies all together. You have such vivid imagination and paint such amazing pictures with just numbers and words! Kudos to you on a great write! :)