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Carpizza

Australia

16-year-old Aussie, brewing poetry and lil antidotes.

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December 14, 2018

From the three-worded phrase,
feeling
             of falling

becomes
        





                                                            




                                                                        familiar

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  • rainandsonder

    I love how you played around with visual poetry here, and the feeling that this poem evokes! It’s short but fantastic.


    10 months ago