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I love the comparisons and the symbolism. Its a short piece of writing yet you were able to convey a good amount of emotion and tell a story.
I feel like this piece was meant to be brief and give an impact and that's great, but you have a great writing style, it would be intriguing to see this story longer. Maybe more description about how she felt when she was in the haven?
This is a great piece, keep writing, best of luck friend.