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"As the guards held the Man to the cross, He did not cry out or struggle. He simply stayed peaceful and still, like a lamb led to the slaughter. " This part made me feel a sense of letting go and let everything that happens continue so it can end.
What made you write this piece? Could you try writing it from the point of view from Mary or James?
I loved it. It sounds so deep and I feel what he felt.
I believe in God and Science (more into astronomy) and with that maybe you can do a piece describing how God created the planets or in the Universe's P.O.V