Peer Review by The Dreamer (South Africa)()

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A Paper Rose #manateecontest

By: pencils.and.paper.roses


FREE WRITING

A rose is known
for love.

The Beast's rose fading, withering 
as he did not find it.

A hopeful young one holding, handing
bouquets to his love.

But these are real.
Real roses, and real love.

So does a paper rose
mean a paper love?


Message to Readers

Just a thought I had one day... :D Enjoy!


Peer Review

The idea behind it, I really liked. Because love doesn't always depend on a flower. Just because you get one it doesnt make the person's love real and if you never get one, that doesn't make your love fake either.


I would like to know what you think of paper roses. So maybe you could add just one more line at the end to explain exactly what you meant.


Reviewer Comments

I liked this, honestly I did and I wish you would write more poetry.