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Just honest thoughts about it thanks.
I love the passion in this. It demonstrates the great strength its needed for this person to get through life and how strong they are for making it through. There are many trials and tribulations that people have to go through and some of the hardest ones can be coming to the conclusion that even if your life is hell, it's not your time to die, and you have a reason to live.
the only suggestion I have is to maybe make it your point of view clearer, is it a letter to someone else, a letter to yourself, or a first-person point of view?
This is a fantastic piece! keep writing and best of luck my friend.