How hard it must be
to process your thoughts
get them organized
get them perfectly lined up
rhymed up
to be easily interpreted by an audience
How easy it must be to let words spill
descriptions that don't go together
that don't make sense
out of context
how nice it must be to express
without feeling like you have to impress
How nice it must be to share and be heard
not having to rhyme every word (I know)
to
let
your
mind
free-fall
And get feedback saying
You're
not
alone
How easy it is to take things for granted
and love when we loose
But somehow still appreciate
How odd it is for emotions to fling about in your mind all at once
all of them
and be able to spill them on a computer screen
How am i doing this?
2 Comments
Luna Lemon
I agree with @Mangolover! Absolutely INCREDIBLE poem that flows so well and has such a creative message, especially for this site;) I love all your subtle rhymes and the unique format you explored to make this piece truly stand out. I love the lines, "get them perfectly lined up / rhymed up / to be easily interpreted by an audience". They have such a good flow to them because of the rhymes and contrast in sentence length. I love the message you portrayed as well, of sharing work with others and that things that in result happen.
Great job! This was amazing and keep writing:)
Mangolover
Amazing poem, & yes, how are you doing all this amazing stuff???? Great job :D