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Message to Readers

This is for Kitty Cheshire's contest, which has a very open-ended prompt. If you like sad/romance writing, I would recommend checking it out! :)

Amputation#BleedingLove

December 11, 2018

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I'm bleeding in love
Because I grew into people
And they grew into me

It was a golden time
Our blood flowed together
A shared river of life

But then they died.

I've been amputated.
Total fiction, but I guess this is what grief would feel like.

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4 Comments
  • Kitty Cheshire

    Okay, so I love the imagery! I love how it was short and sweet then quick and bitter in the end! I felt my heart want to leap out of my chest and plummet off a cliff at the horribly all too familiar feeling. :D Great Work!


    10 months ago
  • paperbird

    wow, i love this!!


    11 months ago
  • Kitty Cheshire

    Yes she does Quille. I know what it's like to lose someone you care for in a way of sorts. So thank you. I'll write a more detailed comment when I have more time. :D Thanks for entering my contest!!!! :D


    11 months ago
  • Quille

    Wow! You conveyed the feeling so well :DD
    BTW, Chapter 23 of Elfboy is up :) Thank you for reading :))


    11 months ago