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Message to Readers
DO NOT COMMENT ON MY PIECES ASKING FOR A SPECIFIC SERIES. I WILL WORK ON IT WHEN I HAVE THE INSPIRATION. I DON'T OWE YOU ANYTHING. BE. PATIENT.
i still can't poetry
You have good rhythm and rhyme. This is good imagery, but even so I had to read it through a few times to fully understand what you were describing. :)
I think you explain it all well here! Of course, this could be longer, but it's fine as-is. :)
I'm sorry that I didn't write more about this poem, my brain's a little tired right now. ;)
But keep up the good work, and I hope you don't face any writer's block any time soon. :)