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“Who was the guy who first looked at a cow and said 'I think I’ll drink whatever comes out of these when I squeeze ’em?”
― Bill Watterson
"Before you judge a man, walk a mile in his shoes. After that who cares?... He’s a mile away and you’ve got his shoes!"
— Billy Connolly
“The only mystery in life is why the kamikaze pilots wore helmets.”
– Al McGuire
shout-out to
Johanna
Quille
The Bubbling Pen
AJ - Izzy
for their amazing pieces in my competition!

#candleflame

December 10, 2018

FREE WRITING

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I held a little candle flame
Trying to tame
The iniquitous land
With just my tiny hand

I held a little candle flame
While playing a little game
Where I hid from my demon
In a world without a sun

I held a little candle flame
When I helped the old dame
Who said she was the monarch
Of the world that lies in the dark

I held a little candle flame
When I lay on a lonely kame
Where I contemplated life
And decided to end it with a knife

I once held a little candle flame
When I roamed without a name
I was a lost faun 
But now it's all gone

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5 Comments
  • RNE

    Thanks for the comments guys! Really appreciate them! @AminahMcBina you can choose, I'm fine with anything.


    7 months ago
  • AminahMcBina

    Hey!
    I'm starting the prizes for the first place winners! Which genre do you like so that I can make you a short story or poem?

    -Mina
    Please reply on the contest results page :)


    7 months ago
  • ProcrastinatingWriter

    This is really awesome and I totally love it. BTW, ur really encouraging and thanks so much for all of your positivity!


    7 months ago
  • Quille

    BTW, I put up 19, 20, and a Q&A for Elfboy :DD


    7 months ago
  • Quille

    Wow! The rhymes are awesome, as usual, and I really love your word choice/figurative language :DDD


    7 months ago