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That it was so emotional, that it connected me with and made me really, really thin and ponder about my own relationships.
Tension was felt through the entire story—hinting subtly at what happened and what after all the good days, but never out-right saying it.
I would love to know what really happened to the friend, but I think that could be saved for another time. It's perfect just the way it is!
You are amazing, Niamh! This is a simply gorgeous piece and I hope that you keep writing, because you are truly an talented writer!
This is such a beautiful, wonderful, heart-connecting piece. The words flow so smoothly. The emotions you portrayed were so real.