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No energy left to write two historical pieces in one day, hope Lee Fudge accepts this entry!
I loved how in little dialect I just read a whole story, understood it all, and fell in love with the character.
I want to know more about Adrian. Does he have any siblings? How old was he when he died? How long ago did he die? May be more on the relationship between Allison and him.
I loved this!! Keep writing!! You should be SUPER proud of this work, it was amazing.