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Will you help me?
I like that this is a short piece with a big meaning.
Perhaps the ending could have been a little different.... "Will you help me?" is a little weak, a stronger ending would have been awesome. For example, you could have ended with "I am lost" and that would've been a really unique and powerful ending, making your poem even more memorable ;)
Nice poem ! :)