Peer Review by A Breath Into Silence (United States)

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A Notepad and Pencil

By: LittleWolf


Something simple, but so powerful 
Two aspects of the same face
One cannot be exploited without the other

One is sharp, like a knife
Encased without, but dark within
Holding the potential to change and colour the world

The other is frail, weak
But full of art and blinding indifference 

Together, they have changed the world


Peer Review

The way that its simple composition is used to better convey its subject.


A feeling of awe, and contentment. The way this poem is written (simple figurative language, short and powerful lines) is really effective! I love it!


Reviewer Comments

Great job!