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Message from Writer

“Who was the guy who first looked at a cow and said 'I think I’ll drink whatever comes out of these when I squeeze ’em?”
― Bill Watterson
"Before you judge a man, walk a mile in his shoes. After that who cares?... He’s a mile away and you’ve got his shoes!"
— Billy Connolly
“The only mystery in life is why the kamikaze pilots wore helmets.”
– Al McGuire
shout-out to
Johanna
Quille
The Bubbling Pen
AJ - Izzy
for their amazing pieces in my competition!

I'm standing here

December 14, 2018

FREE WRITING

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I'm standing here facing the world
No matter what it hurled
I'm standing here looking at the sky
Trying so hard not to cry
I'm standing here next to your grave
Because i'm trying my best to be brave
I'm standing here opening my eyes 
Without hiding behind any guise
I'm standing here no matter what you say
So please get out of my way
 

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10 Comments
  • Deej

    YES


    10 months ago
  • RNE

    Thanks guys!


    11 months ago
  • paperbird

    This is amazing! Really powerful.


    11 months ago
  • Quille

    Love the rhymes! BTW, Congrats with the contest, your piece was really awesome, dude! :DD


    11 months ago
  • RNE

    Thanks @luna lemon and @AJ - Izzy, isee what you did there @AJ - Izzy


    11 months ago
  • RNE

    You can choose the pieces i right now am going to hold a party for myself!


    11 months ago
  • RNE

    WAIT WHAT!?!?! @AminahMcBina really? Woah!!!!!!!!!!!!


    11 months ago
  • AminahMcBina

    Congrats! You won 1st place in my contest! Which 10 pieces do you want me to review? Which 5 pieces do you want me to like and comment on?


    11 months ago
  • AJ - Izzy

    brilliant... as usual :)


    11 months ago
  • Luna Lemon

    This is really amazing. I love the rhymes that were blended so well into this piece so they never felt forced. The amount of layers to it is also incredible, as you peel away more and more into this character and their situation. I like the mystery you left us on, as we don't know everything but we can piece certain things together. I love the line, "Because i'm trying my best to be brave". It fit so well as you talked about this person standing in front of a grave and trying their best to not crumble looking at it. And that last line really hit me in the gut and was such a strong conclusion to this poem.
    Great job and keep writing! This was beautiful<3


    11 months ago