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nezi_nes

Hong Kong

Just keep swimming...in a sea of thoughts and ideas
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Christian
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Can't--get-this thing----out

A Cosmos of Nothing

December 4, 2018

FREE WRITING

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A bead of sweat wrung from parched towel
The river runs dry

Cornucopia encased in diamond
A comical cliffhanger

I can’t crack it open
No matter how much I strain my bruised palm
Against the table
There the unforgiving expanse of
White
Remains


零。


I stir the air

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8 Comments
  • Silver Pen

    The words are beautiful! I wish I could slip into a mindset that lets me write like this more often.
    As for where I'm going to use "Foenetyk" in my story, I'm not exactly sure yet. I was thinking that it would b an alien spin on English spelling, but since it seems to be hard to read (even I have some trouble reading it, and I'm the one who wrote it!) I think I'll keep the usage to a bare minimum. Or include a list of translations in the back of the book, or a list of the sounds that letters and letter combinations stand for.


    9 months ago
  • nezi_nes

    You switch der keyboard languages ma


    9 months ago
  • aggressivebackflip

    HOW DID YOU GET THE LING IN IM SO MAD


    9 months ago
  • nezi_nes

    Thank you Quille!!


    9 months ago
  • Quille

    Language in this is absolutely FANTASTIC!!!
    Beautiful :)


    10 months ago
  • rosemarywisdom

    Hey,
    Part 2 of Chapter 12 in Unspoken is up! https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/67168/version/177374


    10 months ago
  • nezi_nes

    Thank yu for your generous comment ma dear fren :)


    10 months ago
  • omicron7889

    Me: sees a chinese character
    Me: INSTANTLY SPAMS THE LEFT CLICK BUTTON TO READ THIS
    For some reason the phrase 'A comical cliffhanger' is just so perfect. It actually kind of makes me want to laugh. It's a laugh-inducing phrase


    10 months ago