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lol I made this like a year ago, but it seemed to fit the prompt so.. *shrugs*
I love the imagination of this piece. You really capture the beauty of a new idea and how it is so easy to lose once it has formed.
In the beginning, you create a tone of urgency and happiness. As if the writer imagines this new idea turning into a full work. Then there is a slow sense of defeat that starts seeping into your piece; as the writer realizes they can not make this beautiful idea into reality.
The places where you capture the true magic of an idea is right at the beginning when the "lightbulb" goes off. That moment where the idea is so solidly implanted in your mind, it's like a movie is playing in your head.
This makes the writing process seem less like a boring assignment and more like a magic trick.
This is a very well written piece that has tons of details and an imaginative writing style. I really can't suggest many edits; the flow, sentence structure, and theme, all seem to be working beautifully! Congrationaltions :)