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lol I made this like a year ago, but it seemed to fit the prompt so.. *shrugs*
The way that it is written in such a nostalgic I've-been-here-before voice. The details that cement it in your mind.
Sorrowful, regretful, beautiful.
They deepen the emotional impact of the piece fantastically!
I feel that this is how far too many stories end up: abandoned or the one abandoning. Something that affects me very personally.
Keep going! You're a great writer!