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I am simply delighted. I really appreciate the time and effort you put into this piece of writing. It is really beautiful, and it brings out a fictional world, helping and allowing the readers to feel what the characters are feeling, especially Neiko. Personally, I felt his frustration, especially in the line 'They treat me as every normal kid. ‘Hey, do you see that red lizard?’ they ask,' because nobody likes being condescended to, and being patronised is just to most humiliating thing. The readers could really feel Neiko's desperation to see colour, and how he feels out of place. Your writing really helps the reader make a strong connection with the character.
Try and convey the characters feelings not just through their speech, but by their actions as well. That way, the readers can be even more emotionally affected, and feel more sympathetic toward the characters.
You've got some really creative ideas, and I can tell you'll be an inspiration to many people in the future. Keep up the great writing!