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paperbird

United States

Message to Readers

Feedback appreciated.
Hope you like it!

#believe

December 2, 2018

FREE WRITING

10
i
can
fly

past a moon
brighter than stars

i
can
sing

i will soon be
swept away

i
can
dance

under the glow
of daylight wonders
Contest here.  I loved this prompt.

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  • korra4life

    Winners have been announced


    7 months ago
  • AminahMcBina

    "I believe I can fly..." Reminded me of a song I once listened to :D well done! And I believe you can fly too xD


    7 months ago
  • paperbird

    The prompt is korra4life's contest. Check it out!


    8 months ago
  • Aussie23

    Beautiful! I haven't seen this prompt before, what is it?
    Also thanks for noticing i was gone!


    8 months ago
  • korra4life

    Thanks @Kahasai. I think it's necessary for writers to try and write about numerous things, including things that they don't believe in. I find it terribly irritating when I love an author, but all of their stories are the same. I want to be convinced of things that I don't know or believe to be true. This prompt encompasses that.
    @Paperbird- I just submitted my review. Great poem!


    8 months ago
  • Kahasai

    It's definitely a good prompt. Challenging, clever, and necessary for writing believable stories.


    8 months ago
  • korra4life

    I love this! You're right; it wasn't exactly what I had wanted, but this was really good, regardless. Plus, isn't that what a prompt is for? It should be a guideline, not a restriction. Thanks for entering my contest!


    8 months ago