Dummie

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Spray paint, autumn leaves, and some form of velvet
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Casually broken, but it's fine

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You are all lovely in the best of ways
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I've missed you all

Ashes #tenwords

November 30, 2018

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The town burned in flames, with her in the midst.

Ashes floated in the air as she sat and cried.

She watched the building burn and cried out his name.

He knew when he saw the smoke: She was gone.

They hugged each other to try blocking the screaming out.

She sat bolt upright, the smell of burning hair recrementitious.

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I couldn't choose, so I decided to write a few.

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5 Comments
  • rainandsonder

    These are all so good! I love how you create little words and stories in just ten words. My favorite is probably the second, it’s so intriguing! Thanks for contributing to our prompt! :)


    over 1 year ago
  • Corner Writing Club

    These are so interesting! I love the variety between each; every ten-word story is something new. My favorite is the fourth---it portrays loss and dynamic between characters.


    over 1 year ago
  • AminahMcBina

    No worries, Hon, your writing is amazing :)


    over 1 year ago
  • Dummie

    Mina-
    I'm sorry. It's kind of been a long couple of days... But at least I made you feel emotion! :,'(


    over 1 year ago
  • AminahMcBina

    Y'know, this time I didn't smile, I kinda felt pain :(

    -Mina


    over 1 year ago