green.eyes.gurl

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I may have won the battle
But it appears I am losing the war
With no clues as to why the war is happening
And what we can do to stop it
Or help it
Or help me

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"Love is hard to comprehend, its hard to express. When you love someone so much, it comes out in random rambles that don't make any sense. Only to find that sometimes these rambles do make sense." -?
"ALL CAPS IS BEAUTY AND GRACE AND SCREAMING AT THE HUMAN RACE!" -Avin
"Write free" -SFOW
"Saying you shouldn't be sad because some people have it worse is like saying you shouldn't be happy because some people have it better." -Angie (stripedfly1001)
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Spray paint, autumn leaves, and some form of velvet

Ashes #tenwords

November 30, 2018

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The town burned in flames, with her in the midst.

Ashes floated in the air as she sat and cried.

She watched the building burn and cried out his name.

He knew when he saw the smoke: She was gone.

They hugged each other to try blocking the screaming out.

She sat bolt upright, the smell of burning hair recrementitious.

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I couldn't choose, so I decided to write a few.

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5 Comments
  • rainandsonder

    These are all so good! I love how you create little words and stories in just ten words. My favorite is probably the second, it’s so intriguing! Thanks for contributing to our prompt! :)


    about 1 year ago
  • Corner Writing Club

    These are so interesting! I love the variety between each; every ten-word story is something new. My favorite is the fourth---it portrays loss and dynamic between characters.


    about 1 year ago
  • AminahMcBina

    No worries, Hon, your writing is amazing :)


    about 1 year ago
  • green.eyes.gurl

    Mina-
    I'm sorry. It's kind of been a long couple of days... But at least I made you feel emotion! :,'(


    about 1 year ago
  • AminahMcBina

    Y'know, this time I didn't smile, I kinda felt pain :(

    -Mina


    about 1 year ago