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Message to Readers
This was just a thought I had, one of those moments of wonder. I hope it makes sense.......and enjoy!
This is such a gorgeous piece! It has a great message and it's told beautifully.
Like I highlighted at the beginning, I would love to know where the phrase "the most beautiful flowers bloom last" comes from. Otherwise, some of the highlighted phrases and words are what I think could be fixed. :)
Beautiful!! It's such an amazing piece, and I think that it does make sense. ;)