Unnamed

SparklingEmbers

United States

Born an Ember
Growing a Flame
Now a Fire
Love to Write
Dream to Aspire

Message from Writer

Don't forget to have a good day :)

Delibrate

November 30, 2018

Once the world was of blue skies and fluffy clouds
Birds called bluejays traced the sky. 
Once the world was endured in crowds
Populations growing. 
Now the world is grey and dusty
Smoke pouring out of crusty,
Old factories.
Earthquakes dig deep under
Making sounds of distant thunder
And I weep as I stare out to the skies of grey
And remember
What the world once was

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8 Comments
  • SparklingEmbers

    Thank you! Specific parts of my writing is bad... not all I will admit :)


    7 months ago
  • korra4life

    This is great! Why do you keep saying that your writing is bad? The description and flow of the poem is excellent!


    7 months ago
  • SparklingEmbers

    thank you Johanna!!


    7 months ago
  • Johanna

    This is beautiful!


    7 months ago
  • SparklingEmbers

    Thank you Madison Kristine and RNE!!


    7 months ago
  • Madison Kristine

    I love this poem! The alliteration is on point!


    7 months ago
  • RNE

    Forgive me for the horrors you just read.


    7 months ago
  • RNE

    Gosh, wait I want to sound British *clears throat *.....Golly me! That was wonderful! you can applaud now. Thank you.. and scene. That's a take!


    7 months ago