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Any feedback is great.
I like the "Fight because no one else will!" part. It gave a lot of emotion to this piece.
I think this is great. Maybe make it a little longer, but writing a poem like this is HARD! I know it is difficult, keep writing!
There were some spelling mistakes, but nobody is perfect. One thing that was a little distracting from the beauty of the writing was the exclamation marks. Maybe a little less, but overall good job!