Owl

AJ - Izzy

Canada

How to write all of me in less than 10 seconds?

Hmm, let me think... how about DREAMER?

Yup. That works.

Message to Readers

"You can speak well if your tongue can deliver the message of your heart."
- John Ford

Haikus for contest... https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/113104/version/218191

Speak #Ashes

August 23, 2019

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Now is the time
Hard expressions on each face
No going back now

Just take a deep breath
Feel the words flowing through you
No going back now

Explain how you feel
Let your emotions take charge
No going back now

My eyes are shut tight
Echoes in the room haunt me
Is it over yet?

My hands are shaking
The final judgment is here
No going back now

Silence fills me up
Then deafening cheers rise up
The silence vanished

Colors fill the air
Laughter and joy surround me
No need to go back

I am here, and I did it.

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3 Comments
  • AminahMcBina

    "No going back now." This line puts emphasis on the entire piece. The use of repetition was a good idea, it let's you know how much the narrator feels and is willing to keep going!


    10 months ago
  • AminahMcBina

    "No going back now." This line puts emphasis on the entire piece. The use of repetition was a good idea, it let's you know how much the narrator feels and is willing to keep going!


    10 months ago
  • janice

    Contest winners are up!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/93358/version/177010


    10 months ago