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The punch line at the end was AMAZING. The was you built up the irony without the reader realizing it was very well done. I thought it was about some secret ritual or something. Though maybe fast-food is a ritual to some...
I would pay close attention to your grammar and try to vary your words more. I feel like the mistakes (albeit few) in this piece come from not checking rather than not knowing. Other than that, I have little else to say other than you need to post more humor pieces, because this is amazing!
Great job, and keep writing!