.audrey michelle.

United States of America

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.im audrey.
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Message to Readers

this isnt supposed to be beautiful writing

cuz i wanted to

November 28, 2018

FREE WRITING

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life is strange,
ya know?

we don't know 
what we're
gonna do.

but at the same time,
we do.

but the things that 
we know we wanna do,
come out weirdly,
and 
we regret them.

as we say sometimes,
"life happened,"
because it did
and we did something
we regretted
and that
is all part of
life.

life is full of
crap
sometimes,
ya know?

all of the stuff
that happens
and 
makes us wanna
not feel life.

it's strange how we
wanna live,
but
that one thing can make
us wanna not.

life is beautiful,
ya know?

we have those
moments that we 
wanna treasure
forever.

no one can take
them away
from
us.

life is life,
ya know?

we have a life
and we gotta
live it.

through the 
good
and the 
bad,
we just gotta live it.

whether someone shows
you something 
beautiful,
disgusting,
scary,
whatever,
we gotta live it.

when we lose 
something we 
love,
we still gotta live it.

life is the unpredictible,
and the 
unpredictible happened
because i wrote this
and y'all didn't
know
cuz i wanted to

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4 Comments
  • .audrey michelle.

    tysm!


    10 months ago
  • Christy Wisdom

    I really like the ending, how it ties in with how you say that we gotta live life how it comes to us. The last stanza's definitely my favorite, it's such a strong way to end the poem! Also, I like how the stanzas are varied in length and spacing, because it gives the feel of the unpredictable nature to it that you are attributing to life. Great piece!


    10 months ago
  • .audrey michelle.

    Thank you so much!


    about 1 year ago
  • CaisidePoetry

    Love this! The repetition really brings the piece together and makes it seems consistent even when the stanzas change topic. Keep writing! :)


    about 1 year ago