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Holy cow, this is one of my favorite pieces on the site!! I love the mystery and the plot of this story and the wording was absolutely fantastic.
The questions I have are highlighted in the piece. :D
Amazing job!! I also have s piece that’s titled “The Game” if you want to review it, but it’s kuch much longer, about 28,000 words. Great job again!!! :P