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The way I relate to this so much is scary and just it called out to me as if “come, see the legendary piece”
Maybe deepen it to an experience? I don’t know really but describe what happened as a child how you were loved at birth and cute and everyone only saw you but then you fade away as you grow.
Overall beautiful piece and I enjoyed it ! :D