Mangolover

Canada

I spit out words onto an innovation called paper hoping they all make sense...
FOOD!
I'm short.
so-called "depressant writer"
:)

Message to Readers

:)

Notice Me

December 6, 2018

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Notice me.
Please.
I don't want to disappear anymore.
I want to be noticed.
I want to be someone.
I'm tired of being the kid who sits alone,
lonely.

I don't want to be judged by my appearance anymore,
the way you all stop and stare.
It really hurts.
This world is really a cruel place,
we live to gain, 
we cry to lose.
We always want more, never having enough.
Why can't we appreciate for once?
Why can't I be appreciated for once?

My appearance shouldn't define me,
for I am simply hiding behind a face.
I sit there longingly,
but you judge me for being distorted.
Distorted in a way that makes me different,
and as you call it,
'the weird kid'.

I feel desperate to just be noticed.
I feel desperate for you to just look my way.
On the inside, I cry,
but you won't know,
for I sit

unnoticed.






 

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13 Comments
  • Mangolover

    Thanks to everyone for the comments! It makes me happy when I log into my account & I see soo many notifications! Anyways, have a great day & keep writing :P


    11 months ago
  • Kahte

    I like this a lot, very relatable :)


    11 months ago
  • CreativeAngel

    Omg as a shy person Idek how much I relate to this like my life is unnoticed till I achieve something which did happen and people talked to me then but it faded away like what


    11 months ago
  • Gabriel Goodwin

    It hurts when you know you can relate ahhhhhhhhh


    11 months ago
  • Mangolover

    thanks for letting me know, @Quille :D


    12 months ago
  • Quille

    BTW, There are 20 Elfboy chapters up :DD!


    12 months ago
  • Quille

    Good job with this one! It's awesome :DD And very relatable :)


    12 months ago
  • Mangolover

    hahaha, yup that's probably me :P I'm not much of a share-tell person...
    :D


    12 months ago
  • Luca

    hummm... this is something many of us can relate to, yeah...? nice work :P

    // on an unrelated note, are you one of the people that kinda just sit at the back and never say anything during the club meetings...? str creative writing club, does it ring any bells? I don't know, the profile picture is the same and it seems to be too much of a coincidence to ignore... ah if I guessed wrong sorry in advance >.<


    12 months ago
  • Opal Drop

    This is such an amazing reflection of the world. You have done a really great job!


    12 months ago
  • janice

    Contest winners are up!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/92247/version/174912


    12 months ago
  • AJ - Izzy

    Wow, that's so deep! This is such an amazing piece, I'm speechless! Wow, great job!!
    -AJ


    12 months ago
  • korra4life

    I LOVE this!!!!! (Sorry for the caps).
    I can relate on an extremely deep level to this entire poem. I wrote a story about this same type of feeling (years ago, oof) and several poems. I should probably go look for that stuff, now that I think about it.
    But anyway, this was really good. It was personal but also broad enough to relate to many people in some way or form. Great job!


    12 months ago