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"One day, they shall inherit the earth, as was their birthright." I cannot determine for certain if this is the intention of the author, but I think that the shy ones that act without asking for praise are the ones that deserve the most.
I can't wait for the day that they shall inherit the earth.
Was it hard to write this poem, due to the complex pattern and the use of symbols?
Wow! Incredible example of a pantoum. This specific structure makes the poem extremely entertaining and powerful. I also think that the use of flutes as symbols of introverts that shall come out of the shadows and surprise everyone is brilliant. Overall, I certainly enjoyed this piece. There's not much that should be changed, maybe adding some type of meter to the lines could add a better rhythmical structure. Nevertheless, this poem was incredibly well crafted.