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A.khalid

Pakistan

13 years old.
Study in 8th grade
Inspired by Rald Dahl in poetry
Inspired by Anna Sewell in stories and novels
Like kids or the people pretending to be the best
Food lover but spicy
Interest in discovering nature.

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November 25, 2018

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I can't believe you
You studying stars
You winning unexpected wars
You reading Bible and Quran as a key book
You having a handsome look
You loved the one that hates you
You interested in miracles too

You are the biggest loser
You are in the matter of your lord is  still chooser
You are not sure
you don't believe after illness who cure
You still didn't accepted Islam
You didn't find Allah the Merciful
I can't believe you


 

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5 Comments
  • A.khalid

    but how


    11 months ago
  • AminahMcBina

    Salaam,
    you might want to change this piece to:
    I can't believe you
    You studying the stars
    You winning unexpected wars
    You reading the Bible and Quran as a key book
    You having a handsome look
    You loved the one that hate you
    You being interested in miracles too

    You are the biggest loser
    You are in the matter of your lord who is the chooser
    You are not sure
    you don't believe after illness there’s a cure
    You still didn't accepted Islam
    You didn't find Allah the Merciful
    I can't believe you


    11 months ago
  • A.khalid

    thanks.
    i would try to recover my mistakes


    11 months ago
  • AminahMcBina

    Thanks for entering my contest! I want to second everything RNE said. This was brilliant!!!! I absolutely loved it!

    -Mina


    11 months ago
  • RNE

    I love how you bring religion into the poem. There were a few grammar mistakes tho...but a great work!!


    11 months ago