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The lyrical rhythm of the piece, and the way the author used contrasting ideas and strong imagery to pull me into their world for a brief moment. I wasn't just reading - I was there, and I could understand exactly what they meant. Just.... wow.
I am a little curious (and please keep in mind this is a strange, rhetorical question) -- where is this taking place? A city? A small town?
I really like this piece!