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Message to Readers
I guess I write because I'm scared of losing my thoughts. I hate thinking about all of the brilliant ideas that have been lost because someone didn't try (albeit futilely) to hold onto them. Am I a thought hoarder? Maybe...
"I write as a futile attempt at permanence."
That hit really deep. It made me feel suddenly aware of how temporary my existence is and how people like you and me will do anything to "leave a mark" behind.
The whole idea of leaving some of my written work behind. I, just a human being may be mortal but maybe something I've created (my writing) can live forever. I love that so much. Also the things about being a 'thought hoarder', I am the most forgetful person on the planet and I can really relate!
I am in love with your choice of words! I really need to expand my vocabulary now haha. I really enjoyed reading this profound piece, great job!